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SECRET TUNNEL.
SECRET TUNNEL.
THROUGH THE MOUNTAINNNNN
SECRETSECRETSECRETSECRET
TUNNNNELLLLLLL!
( for
's story )
I also want to do an entrance and an exit of the tunnel. The exit is up near that mountainous city from my last deviation!
This isn't one of those nice, neat, and nifty bricked Victorian-like tunnels (at least not in this section), because this is more of an ....underground.... thing. (No pun intended? >_>) I have a feeling this wouldn't be sponsored by the government and wouldn't have anyone to pay for nice bricks. I imagined a bunch of smugglers with shovels just crazily digging this thing. Halfway across the country. Yeaaaah.
I also learned how to draw spiderwebs. Neeeaaat-o.
Elionera: [link]
(Desert Town): [link]
(Mountainous City): [link]
Ludi: [link]
Orbis: [link]
Maple: [link]
Underground Tunnel: [link]
Tunnel Exit: [link]
Airship: [link]
SECRET TUNNEL.
THROUGH THE MOUNTAINNNNN
SECRETSECRETSECRETSECRET
TUNNNNELLLLLLL!
( for
's story )I also want to do an entrance and an exit of the tunnel. The exit is up near that mountainous city from my last deviation!
This isn't one of those nice, neat, and nifty bricked Victorian-like tunnels (at least not in this section), because this is more of an ....underground.... thing. (No pun intended? >_>) I have a feeling this wouldn't be sponsored by the government and wouldn't have anyone to pay for nice bricks. I imagined a bunch of smugglers with shovels just crazily digging this thing. Halfway across the country. Yeaaaah.
I also learned how to draw spiderwebs. Neeeaaat-o.
Elionera: [link]
(Desert Town): [link]
(Mountainous City): [link]
Ludi: [link]
Orbis: [link]
Maple: [link]
Underground Tunnel: [link]
Tunnel Exit: [link]
Airship: [link]
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Originality Technique ImpactI feel really bad giving you a low rating after you gave me such a sweet critique. But I hope my explanations will justify the stars I gave you, and render you into a better artist than you are now.
I know this is an illustration for a story, but I feel that this could have been done in a way to make the image more intriguing. First of all, in terms of composition, this has a very bulls-eye sort of composition (do you see what I mean, with the focal point in the center, and circles all around it?). Also, the colors do not stand out--everything is very brown, and the fire are kind of a muted yellow-tan, so everything tends to blend in together. I think you would benefit from experimenting with bolder composition (for instance, try looking at the inside of a cave from a different angle?). Also, caves can be a medley of different colors, not just brown. In addition, are there characters in the story? Could they be added in the illustration?
I do like the shading of the cave, though. I like the sense of depth to the environment, and how I do feel that I'm almost inside the cave, with more light in the front, and the fact that it gets darker further into the cave. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Smile)"/>I hope you find this helpful. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
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